Help with an English Language Essay?

Your sentences do not make sense and they are missing words throughout. The sentence starting with 'after' has no ending...what was the result after all of this? How can you then follow on with a sentence starting with also? Again, what is the end bit of this sentence? You have again omitted the result. You then start a sentence with after - 'after an arranged an' what arranged the interview? an what? an Orangutan? Again what was after the interview - you did not put the result into the sentence. It is impossible to reword this without knowing what you are trying to say.